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2015-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Happy New Year Nina! How are you today? I'm sorry that I postponed our class yesterday. Because I caught a cold and went to a business trip. My son's condition is getting better. What are you going to achieve this new year? I hope your wishes come true. I wish you will meet a nice guy. Anyway my homework is as follows. "Have you ever had a Deja Vu experience?" I had never experience such a Deja Vu. But I think that it can also happen to us. I saw a Deja Vu movie 8 years ago. The movie was very impressive and I took an interest in a Deja Vu. All of people think of the past or future. For this reason, I believe that I can experience a Deja Vu situation. Thank you for teachings. Have a nice day.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

Happy New Year too!

Thank you for writing an essay.

I\'m sorry to hear that you had a cold.

I hope that you feel better now.

I am really excited to talk to you. Hihihihi.

And it is also nice to hear that your son\'s condition is getting better.

I am so blessed to have a kind and sweet student like you.

I am so excited to hear your ideas in class.

Teacher Nina


Happy New Year Nina!
>> correct
How are you today?
>> correct
I\'m sorry that I postponed our class yesterday.

>> correct

>> I apologize that I put off our class yesterday.
Because I caught a cold and went to a business trip.
>> It is because I caught a cold and went on a business trip.

>> I had a cold and I went on a business trip,


My son\'s condition is getting better.
>> correct
What are you going to achieve this new year? 

>> correct

>> What do you want to achieve this year?
I hope your wishes come true.

>> I hope your wishes will come true.

>> I hope that your wishes will come true.
I wish you will meet a nice guy.
>> I wish that you will meet a nice guy.


Anyway my homework is as follows.
\"Have you ever had a Deja Vu experience?\"
>> correct


I had never experience such a Deja Vu.

>> I had never experienced Deja Vu. 

>> I never experienced Deja Vu yet.
But I think that it can also happen to us.
>> correct


I saw a Deja Vu movie 8 years ago. 

>> Did you mean: I saw a movie about Deja Vu eight years ago.
The movie was very impressive and I took an interest in a Deja Vu.

>> The movie was very impressive and I became interested in Deja Vu;

All of people think of the past or future.

>> All people think about the past and the future.

For this reason, I believe that I can experience a Deja Vu situation.
>> correct


Thank you for teachings.
>> Thank you for your teachings.

>> Thank you for teaching me. 


Have a nice day.

>> correct

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