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Hi. Erine^^
When I was having a class with you in my hospital, I used to be so nervous.
Because I feel that emergency situation might be happen during absence me.
I asked my workers alarm me. But I could not focus on our time perfectly. Sorry for it. Please understand my situation and my incoherent speech.
11. John decided to start up golf on weekends.
12. It is not a difference to me whether we meet them or not.
13. We were worn out after all the hard work.
14. We saw quite many wild animals while on vacation.
15. They are late as usual. I don't think we should wait for them.
16. Are you going to enterthe competition?
17. You had better inquire to the tourist information office.
18. Ireland was part of the UK, wasn't it?
19. They will be presentat the party.
20. Will they go swimming this summer?
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Good morning, [이름]!^^
I understand your situation when you are in the hospital working.
There is no problem with that feeling because I know you
are a dedicated nurse. I believe you can also balance your emotions
in the future!^.^ By that time, you will have felt nervous yet more relaxed
while you are at your workplace and talking to me.
Have a great day!^.^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi. Erine^^>> Correct
When I was having a class with you in my hospital, I used to be so nervous.
When I was having a class with you in my hospital, I used to be so nervous.
>> When I was having a class with you in the hospital, I used to be so nervous.
Because I feel that emergency situation might be happen during absence me.
Because I feel that emergency situation might be happen during absence me.
>>Because I feel that an emergency situation might happen during my absence.
I asked my workers alarm me.
I asked my workers alarm me.
>> I asked my coworkers to alarm me.
But I could not focus on our time perfectly.
>> Correct.
Sorry for it.
>> Sorry for that.
Please understand my situation and my incoherent speech.
>>Correct
11. John decided to start up golf on weekends.
11. John decided to start up golf on weekends.
>>to take up
12. It is not a difference to me whether we meet them or not.
12. It is not a difference to me whether we meet them or not.
>>makes no difference
13. We were worn out after all the hard work.
13. We were worn out after all the hard work.
>>Correct
14. We saw quite many wild animals while on vacation.
14. We saw quite many wild animals while on vacation.
>>quite a few
15. They are late as usual. I don\'t think we should wait for them.
15. They are late as usual. I don\'t think we should wait for them.
>>Correct
16. Are you going to enterthe competition?
16. Are you going to enterthe competition?
>>Correct
17. You had better inquire to the tourist information office.
17. You had better inquire to the tourist information office.
>>inquire at
18. Ireland was part of the UK, wasn\'t it?
18. Ireland was part of the UK, wasn\'t it?
>>Correct
19. They will be presentat the party.
19. They will be presentat the party.
>>Correct
20. Will they go swimming this summer?
20. Will they go swimming this summer?
>>Correct
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