homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there TOM!
Oh I am excited for you.
I hope to see your invention in class.
When will you go to Daejeon?
I really like to see a lot of inventions.
Please tell me more about it in class.
Kindly go over the corrections below.
I hope that we will have our class again.
Teacher Nina
I want to travel with my family this year.
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I will travel Daejeon to see my invention.
>> I will travel to Daejeon to see my invention.
>> I will go to Daejon to see my invention.
My invention is showed by Korean Invention Association in National Science Museum.
>> My invention is showed by the Korean Invention Association in National Science Museum.
THere are a lot of things to do but I can\'t say it one by one because it is innumerable.
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