homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you wish for 2015 and why?
I hope that I will be happy with my family a long time.
Also, I want to spend enjoyable time with my husband until my last life.
I want to save a lot of money.
I want that I don't waste any money.
I want to be coming my home early. so I want to be having a free time for myself.
I want to speak English well more than last year.
I want to trip oversea again.
I want to be health with my family.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
I also wish that yoiur family will be happy family. I wish you
a healthy and a wealthy life. I wish you a prosperous new year as well.
Take good care of your health, okay.
Have a great day ahead and see you! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
I hope that I will be happy with my family a long time.
>> I hope that I will be happy with my family for a long time.Also, I want to spend enjoyable time with my husband until my last life.
>> CorrectI want to save a lot of money.
>> CorrectI want that I don\'t waste any money.
>> CorrectI want to be coming my home early.
>> I want to go home eartly.
so I want to be having a free time for myself.
>> I want to have free time.I want to speak English well more than last year.
>> CorrectI want to trip oversea again.
>> I want to go overseas again.I want to be health with my family.
>> I want my family to be happy.
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