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2015-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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What do you wish for 2015 and why? I hope that I will be happy with my family a long time. Also, I want to spend enjoyable time with my husband until my last life. I want to save a lot of money. I want that I don't waste any money. I want to be coming my home early. so I want to be having a free time for myself. I want to speak English well more than last year. I want to trip oversea again. I want to be health with my family.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ I also wish that yoiur family will be happy family. I wish you a healthy and a wealthy life. I wish you a prosperous new year as well. Take good care of your health, okay.   Have a great day ahead and see you! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   I hope that I will be happy with my family a long time. >> I hope that I will be happy with my family for a long time.Also, I want to spend enjoyable time with my husband until my last life. >> CorrectI want to save a lot of money. >> CorrectI want that I don\'t waste any money. >> CorrectI want to be coming my home early. >> I want to go home eartly. so I want to be having a free time for myself. >>  I want to have free time.I want to speak English well more than last year. >> CorrectI want to trip oversea again. >> I want to go overseas again.I want to be health with my family. >> I want my family to be happy.

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