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2015-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi jeny^^ It was dificult. but It was good to me. thank you~! What is one thing you have learned from your past? What would you do differently if you could? I have learned from my past, don't be afraid of fail. We must just do it. If I don't prepare, I don't work. because I want work perfectly. but I knew that It's not good to me. they don't care. so these days I don't prepare but I just do it.

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Hello Jenny,

Thank you for your essay, I know you have to step forward in learning English, if you are determined to do so.

You can do any thing and everything you want in life as long as you want to.

Motivate yourself to learn and do crazy thing in life like this, writing an essay!!!

T. Jeny

 

Hi jeny^^
>>Hi Jeny,
It was dificult. but It was good to me. thank you~!
>>I was difficult for me but I guess it can help me improve my English skills. Thank you!!!

What is one thing you have learned from your past? What would you do differently if you could?

I have learned from my past, don\'t be afraid of fail. We must just do it.

>>I have learned that I shouldn\'t be afraid to fail. We must just do it.
If I don\'t prepare, I don\'t work. because I want work perfectly.
>>If I didn\'t prepare in ahead of time, I don\'t work because I want everything to be perfect.
but I knew that It\'s not good to me.
>>But I realized that it is not good for me.
they don\'t care. so these days I don\'t prepare but I just do it.

>>People don\'t care, so even if I am not prepared, I just do it.

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