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Hello again Ms. [이름]!
Well, it really sounds stupid. Why make a plan when you are not going to do it anyway?
But as what you have mentioned, it has a good point.
And the thing ism you would have goal to reach.
You will still try your best to achieve it even if you were not able to successfully finish everything.
As long as you did your best and made some effort instead of not doing anything. Right?
Anyway, thanks again for your time and see you tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Have you ever made a New Year\'s resolution? What was it? Were you successful?
Yes, I have. I try to make new year\'s resoltions as other people do.
>> correct!
But it doesn\'t mean that I achiev all lists that I planned.
>> But it does not mean that I have achieve all the plans I have listed.
Why am I still making resolutions eventhough I could not make the ture?
>> Why am I still making resolutions eventhough I could not make true?
It is because it makes me think about my objects for that moment.
>> correct!
It sounds stupid but it really helps me.
>> correct!
Last year, I made some lists that I want to do.
>> correct!
Learning how to play a ukulele, learning Japanese and keeping studying English.
>> correct!
I gave up in the middle of the year but I tried againg and I am gettin closer to achive to my goals.
>> I gave up in the middle of the year but I tried it again and I am getting closer in achieving my goals.
It is not yet completely successful but it is half successful.hehe
>> It is not yet completely successful but I am already half-way done with it. hehe
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