Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름]!!!
You are really a sweet person. ^^
Thanks for including me in your wishes this year.
I am so flattered! Hihihihi.
I hope that you will feel best soon.
Are you familiar with the vaporub called \"Vicks\"?
Try to search it on the internet.
It will help you lessen your cough.
I will tell you how to use it if you already have it.
Have a nice day.
Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
Hello Nina!
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How are you today?
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My condition is getting better, but I cough several times.
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>> My condition is getting better, but I still have a cough.
It is very cold and the wind is very strong nowdays.
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My homework is as follows.
\" What are you looking forward to do this 2015?\"
1. I decided to stop smoking. Especially, price of cigarettes was increase by goverment.
>> I decided to stop smoking especially the price of cigarettes increased.
>> I decided to stop smoking especially the government increased the price of cigarette.
2. I will study English for an hour a day.
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>> I will study English for one hour a day.
3. Most of all, I hope that my family will stay healthy.
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>> Most of all, I hope that my family will always be healthy.
4. I wish that you will meet a nice guy^^
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Thank you for your teachings.
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Talk to you soon.
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Have a nice day.
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