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2015-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hello Nina! How are you today? My condition is getting better, but I cough several times. It is very cold and the wind is very strong nowdays. My homework is as follows. " What are you looking forward to do this 2015?" 1. I decided to stop smoking. Especially, price of cigarettes was increase by goverment. 2. I will study English for an hour a day. 3. Most of all, I hope that my family will stay healthy. 4. I wish that you will meet a nice guy^^ Thank you for your teachings. Talk to you soon. Have a nice day. .

강사 첨삭

[이름]!!!

You are really a sweet person. ^^

Thanks for including me in your wishes this year.

I am so flattered! Hihihihi.

I hope that you will feel best soon.

Are you familiar with the vaporub called \"Vicks\"?

Try to search it on the internet.
It will help you lessen your cough.

I will tell you how to use it if you already have it.

Have a nice day.

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina


Hello Nina!
>> correct
How are you today?
>> correct
My condition is getting better, but I cough several times.
>> correct

>> My condition is getting better, but I still have a cough.
It is very cold and the wind is very strong nowdays.
>> correct


My homework is as follows.

\" What are you looking forward to do this 2015?\"

1. I decided to stop smoking. Especially, price of cigarettes was increase by goverment.
>> I decided to stop smoking especially the price of cigarettes increased.

>> I decided to stop smoking especially the government increased the price of cigarette.
2. I will study English for an hour a day.
>> correct

>> I will study English for one hour a day.
3. Most of all, I hope that my family will stay healthy.
>> correct

>> Most of all, I hope that my family will always be healthy.
4. I wish that you will meet a nice guy^^
>> correct


Thank you for your teachings.
>> correct
Talk to you soon.
>> correct
Have a nice day.

>> correct

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