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2015-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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What are some things that make you really sad? I feel sadness when I watch the sad movies or documentary film like hospital story of children. I can't stand tears when I'm watching them.

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Good Morning! Thank you for this accomplished homework! I also do feel sad when I watched movies or anything that\'s heart melting. But I\'m surprised to know that you also is an emotional person knowing that you are a guy. HAHAHA! It\'s just unusual however, it\'s a good thing. I can see that you are a kind and loving Father. Your kids are very lucky to have you! -T.Faye   What are some things that make you really sad?>> CORRECT:I feel sadness when I watch the sad movies or documentary film like hospital story of children. >> I feel sad when I watch sad movies or documentary film like stories of children in the hospital.I can\'t stand tears when I\'m watching them. >> I can\'t stand to cry when I watch those kinds of movies.

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