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2015-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

What do you think people think of you? I don't know exactly. And I don't want to know their thinking for me. If I know them, I will try to be someone for them. But I am me. I am just satisfied their advices.

강사 첨삭

Good Morning, Mr. [이름]! Happy Thursday! I do agree that you are what you are! Mr. [이름], you shouldn\'t try to please people who don\'t believe in you! Instead, proved to them that they\'re wrong! Don\'t live for the expectations of others. Do not live for others sake. Live because you wanted, too and because you have goals! -T.Faye   What do you think people think of you?>> CORRECT:I don\'t know exactly. >> CORRECT:And I don\'t want to know their thinking for me. >> And I don\'t want to know what they\'re thinking about me.If I know them, I will try to be someone for them. >> CORRECT:But I am me. >> CORRECT:I am just satisfied their advices. >> I am just satisfied with their advices.  

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