homework
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What do you think of It is sometimes good to lie?
In my opinion, sometimes, we have to tell a white lie.
It can help many people.
If a doctor would tell a white lie, a patient would be having the hope.
However, we have to be careful about a white lie.
Sometimes, It can make bad situation.
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In my opinion, sometimes, we have to tell a white lie.
>> CorrectIt can help many people.
>> CorrectIf a doctor would tell a white lie, a patient would be having the hope.
>> CorrectHowever, we have to be careful about a white lie.
>> CorrectSometimes, It can make bad situation.
>> Sometimes, it can make bad situation.
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