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As the society develops, many people opposes money as the only value when we work. However, since I have a different point of view with them, I do agree that the most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. First, the most significant value in my life is being together with people whom I like. I study so as to spend my time with them doing what we want. Having dinner in a fancy restaurant or watching movies together require much money which makes it the most important value of a job. I also need money when I manage myself. Keeping myself healthy and attractive definitely costs a lot of money. I need to go to the gym and buy expensive clothes in the department stores. Self management is a kind of manner when meeting someone, which is the most valuable activity that I can do. As everyone knows, we can pursue different values since we have different kinds of view. In my case, money enables what I want and that is the reason why it is the only value when I work.

Thank you very much for this homework [이름]! I\'m very glad you are diligently doing your homework. Keep up the good work and keep writing! As the society develops, many people opposes money as the only value when we work. >>As the society develops, many people does not consider  money as the only reason why we work. However, since I have a different point of view with them, I do agree that the most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. >>However, since I have a different point of view with them, I do agree that the most important aspect of working is the money a person earns. First, the most significant value in my life is being together with people whom I like. >>First, the most important thing in my life is being  with the people I love.  I study so as to spend my time with them doing what we want. >>I put efforts in spending time with them. Having dinner in a fancy restaurant or watching movies together require much money which makes it the most important value of a job. >>Having dinner in a fancy restaurant or watching movies both require a lot of money and it\'s one motivation to work.I also need money when I manage myself. >>I also need money to manage myself. Keeping myself healthy and attractive definitely costs a lot of money. >>Correct! I need to go to the gym and buy expensive clothes in the department stores. >>I need to go to the gym and buy expensive clothes in department stores. Self management is a kind of manner when meeting someone, which is the most valuable activity that I can do. >>Self management is always important especially when meeting someone.As everyone knows, we can pursue different values since we have different kinds of view. >>As everyone knows, we can pursue different paths since we have different points of view.  In my case, money enables what I want and that is the reason why it is the only value when I work. >>But in my case, money enables me to do what I want and that is the reason why it is the only value when I work.