homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~ my teacher Erine^^
Thank you for understanding my situation.
I am really happy to study English with you.
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I choose a smart phone.
Smart phone is passing over simple telephone.
It replaces this generation.
We can not imagine the world without smart-phone.
We communicate each other via smart-phone on the net.
We can bank, take photo, take recording somthing, do shopping and watching TV.
It has many functions. we can download various applications. And so we use its functions. We doesn't give up this convenience. And We cannot exclude this phenomenon when we are thinking 21 century.
That way do I choose this item.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday, [이름].
Later in our class, you might hear me having a hard time talking.
I still have cough and colds, so I might not have my golden voice while
talking with you.kkk
However, I am going to try my best to teach you
today. See you then!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi~ my teacher Erine^^
>> Correct
Thank you for understanding my situation.
>> Correct
I am really happy to study English with you.
>> Correct
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I choose a smart phone.
>> Correct
Smart phone is passing over simple telephone.
>> Smart phone came from a simple telephone.
It replaces this generation.
>>It replaces this generation\'s simple phone.
We can not imagine the world without smart-phone.
>> We can not imagine the world without smart phones.
We communicate each other via smart-phone on the net.
>>We communicate with other people via net on our smart phone.
We can bank, take photo, take recording somthing, do shopping and watching TV.
>> We can use on line banking, take photos, record something, do shopping and watch TV.
It has many functions.
>> Correct.
or>> It has many other functions.
we can download various applications.
>> We can download various applications.
And so we use its functions.
>> And so on.
We doesn\'t give up this convenience.
>> We can\'t give up this convenience.
And We cannot exclude this phenomenon when we are thinking 21 century.
>> Correct.
That way do I choose this item.
>> Correct
Later in our class, you might hear me having a hard time talking.
I still have cough and colds, so I might not have my golden voice while
talking with you.kkk
However, I am going to try my best to teach you
today. See you then!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi~ my teacher Erine^^
>> Correct
Thank you for understanding my situation.
>> Correct
I am really happy to study English with you.
>> Correct
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I choose a smart phone.
>> Correct
Smart phone is passing over simple telephone.
>> Smart phone came from a simple telephone.
It replaces this generation.
>>It replaces this generation\'s simple phone.
We can not imagine the world without smart-phone.
>> We can not imagine the world without smart phones.
We communicate each other via smart-phone on the net.
>>We communicate with other people via net on our smart phone.
We can bank, take photo, take recording somthing, do shopping and watching TV.
>> We can use on line banking, take photos, record something, do shopping and watch TV.
It has many functions.
>> Correct.
or>> It has many other functions.
we can download various applications.
>> We can download various applications.
And so we use its functions.
>> And so on.
We doesn\'t give up this convenience.
>> We can\'t give up this convenience.
And We cannot exclude this phenomenon when we are thinking 21 century.
>> Correct.
That way do I choose this item.
>> Correct
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