Homework
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<Homework>
Q : What accomplishment are you most proud of?
A : I think I experienced my best accomplishment in last year.
Since I became a member of my company, for the first time,
I got the main character of the project on May in last year.
Before that change, I had been supported senior members of my team.
I faced many difficulties to progress the project for myself,
so I did my best to solve the problems.
Through that experience, I could improve my job skills and gain the confidence.
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Good Morning, [이름]!
I am sorry I wasn\'t able to talk to you awhile ago!
Anyways, thank you for having class with teacher kathrine.
I will talk to you on Monday!
Have a great weekend!
-T.Faye
<Homework>>> CORRECT:Q : What accomplishment are you most proud of?>> CORRECT:A : I think I experienced my best accomplishment in last year.>> A : I think I experienced my best accomplishment last year.Since I became a member of my company, for the first time, >> CORRECT:
I got the main character of the project on May in last year.>> I got the main character in the project last year, May.Before that change, I had been supported senior members of my team.>> Before that changed, I have been supported by senior members of my team.I faced many difficulties to progress the project for myself,
>> I faced many difficulties to progress the project by myself, so I did my best to solve the problems.>> CORRECT:Through that experience, I could improve my job skills and gain the confidence. >> Through that experienced, I have improved my job skills and I gained confidence.
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