Homework

2015-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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<Homework> Q : What accomplishment are you most proud of? A : I think I experienced my best accomplishment in last year. Since I became a member of my company, for the first time, I got the main character of the project on May in last year. Before that change, I had been supported senior members of my team. I faced many difficulties to progress the project for myself, so I did my best to solve the problems. Through that experience, I could improve my job skills and gain the confidence.

강사 첨삭

Good Morning, [이름]! I am sorry I wasn\'t able to talk to you awhile ago! Anyways, thank you for having class with teacher kathrine. I will talk to you on Monday! Have a great weekend! -T.Faye   <Homework>>> CORRECT:Q : What accomplishment are you most proud of?>> CORRECT:A : I think I experienced my best accomplishment in last year.>> A : I think I experienced my best accomplishment last year.Since I became a member of my company, for the first time, >> CORRECT: I got the main character of the project on May in last year.>> I got the main character in the project last year, May.Before that change, I had been supported senior members of my team.>> Before that changed, I have been supported by senior members of my team.I faced many difficulties to progress the project for myself, >> I faced many difficulties to progress the project by myself, so I did my best to solve the problems.>> CORRECT:Through that experience, I could improve my job skills and gain the confidence. >> Through that experienced, I have improved my job skills and I gained confidence.

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