homework
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If you were given a chance to go back in time, would you change anything? Why?
I would not change anything eventhough I can go back in time. I like my life now. I sometime regret my acts which I did in the past. However, if I change the somthing in the past, I am not sure I'd satisfy with the second choose. Also, I think my wrong acts made who I am now. I admit my wrong act and I learned from it. So, eventhough I regret those acts, I will not change it.
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If you were given a chance to go back in time, would you change anything? Why?>> CORRECT:I would not change anything eventhough I can go back in time.
>> CORRECT:
I like my life now.
>> CORRECT:
I sometime regret my acts which I did in the past.
>> I sometime regret the actions I did in the past.
However, if I change the somthing in the past, I am not sure I\'d satisfy with the second choose.
>> However, if I change somthing in the past, I am not sure I\'d be satisfied with my choice.
Also, I think my wrong acts made who I am now.
>> Also, I think my wrong actions created the [이름] I have become.
I admit my wrong act and I learned from it.
>> CORRECT:
So, eventhough I regret those acts, I will not change it.
>> CORRECT:
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