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2015-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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What impact do you want to leave in the world? I never thought about leaving impact in the world. It will be very happy to leave impact in the world while doing my work that I enjoy. However, I don't want to make my goal as leaving impact in the world or I don't want to live to be a great person in the world. I will do my best to do my work what I want to do.

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Wow! Hi [이름]! It\'s been awhile. How are you? I hope you\'re fine! Happy Friday, by the way! =T.Faye   What impact do you want to leave in the world?>> CORRECT:I never thought about leaving impact in the world. >> CORRECT:  It will be very happy to leave impact in the world while doing my work that I enjoy. >>  I will be very happy to leave an impact in the world while doing the work that I enjoy.  However, I don\'t want to make my goal as leaving impact in the world or I don\'t want to live to be a great person in the world. >>  However, I don\'t want my goal to have an impact in the world or I don\'t want to live to be a great person in the world.  I will do my best to do my work what I want to do. >> I will do my best to do my work that\'s  what I want to do.

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