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Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
I agree that many parents have little time for their childre. Most childre do not get much attention from their parents. There are several reason. These day, most parents are too busy to work. Both parents have to work for all day, so they can not have time with their children. Also, children don't have time to be with parents. They are too busy because of all the academic work they have to do. They have to stay at school all day long. They even go to acadami to learn more. For these reasons, many parents cannot have their time for children as in the past.
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Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children.
>>In modern lifestyle, parents may have less time for their children.
Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?>>Correct!I agree that many parents have little time for their childre.
>>Correct!
Observe the proper spelling of the word CHILDREN.
Most childre do not get much attention from their parents.
>>Most children do no get much attention from their parents.
There are several reason.
>>There are several reasons.
These day, most parents are too busy to work.
>>These days, most parents are very busy working.
Both parents have to work for all day, so they can not have time with their children.
>>Both parents have to work all day that they can not have time with their children.
Also, children don\'t have time to be with parents.
>>And children at the same time don\'t have much time with their parents.
They are too busy because of all the academic work they have to do.
>>Correct!
They have to stay at school all day long.
>>Correct!
They even go to acadami to learn more.
>>They even go to academy to gain more knowledge.
For these reasons, many parents cannot have their time for children as in the past.
>>Correct!
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