Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello again, Jessie!
Oh, do you relly think so? One thing I know is, since I got started the class, I improved so far. But I can also feel that my groth stops. Whenever I sense like that, I'm little bit disappointed. Then what is the special way for my development? Do you have an idea? How could you improve yourself? I want to ask you some advice if you're pleased.
And I have one question. In the grammar, you fixed 'beared' to 'bore'. 'Beared' is also one of bear's past forms. It means that 'bear' has two past forms. I found it in a dictionary. Please explain about it in the next class.
Then see you!
<Essay>
I don't usually enjoy an horror genre actually. But there's one thing that I can remember. 'REC' was the scariest one for me. It has a special filming technique and it made moive scarier. There's another movie that use the same technique. It's on the tip of my tongue... I haven't seen that, but it had some fame when it was released because of its technique.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
I\'m so sorry. I just checked your composition so I didn\'t mention it earlier.
Hahaha. Of course [이름]. You are improving. You are better than before.
I\'m not saying that you feel exactly what I said but there might be some times when you feel that way.
And like you\'ve said, you do. Anyway, I always give you suggestions and advices and I don\'t know if you\'ve tried it all.
But you are the only one who can discover your best way of learning. Try to evaluate yourself. ^_^
And for the word \"bear.\" I\'m sorry but what I really know and based on what I\'ve searched, it\'s only bore.
So please go over that again.
Let\'s enjoy this day. See you!
~T. Jessie~
Hello again, Jessie!
>> Correct!
Oh, do you relly think so?
>> Oh, do you really think so?
One thing I know is, since I got started the class, I improved so far.
>> Correct!
But I can also feel that my groth stops.
>> But I can also feel that my growth stops.
Whenever I sense like that, I\'m little bit disappointed.
>> Whenever I sense like that, I\'m a little bit disappointed.
Then what is the special way for my development?
>> Correct!
Do you have an idea?
>> Correct!
How could you improve yourself?
>> Correct!
I want to ask you some advice if you\'re pleased.
>> I want to ask you some advice, if you\'re please.
And I have one question.
>> Correct!
In the grammar, you fixed \'beared\' to \'bore\'.
>> In the grammar corrections you\'ve noted, you changed \'beared\' to \'bore\'.
\'Beared\' is also one of bear\'s past forms.
>> Correct!
It means that \'bear\' has two past forms.
>> Correct!
I found it in a dictionary.
>> Correct!
Please explain about it in the next class.
>> Correct!
Then see you!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
I don\'t usually enjoy an horror genre actually.
>> I don\'t usually enjoy horror genre.
But there\'s one thing that I can remember.
>> Correct!
\'REC\' was the scariest one for me.
>> \'REC\' is the scariest one for me.
It has a special filming technique and it made moive scarier.
>> It has a special filming technique and it made the movie scarier.
There\'s another movie that use the same technique.
>> There\'s another movie that used the same technique.
It\'s on the tip of my tongue...
>> Correct!
I haven\'t seen that, but it had some fame when it was released because of its technique.
>> I haven\'t seen that, but it became famous when it was released because of its technique.
I\'m so sorry. I just checked your composition so I didn\'t mention it earlier.
Hahaha. Of course [이름]. You are improving. You are better than before.
I\'m not saying that you feel exactly what I said but there might be some times when you feel that way.
And like you\'ve said, you do. Anyway, I always give you suggestions and advices and I don\'t know if you\'ve tried it all.
But you are the only one who can discover your best way of learning. Try to evaluate yourself. ^_^
And for the word \"bear.\" I\'m sorry but what I really know and based on what I\'ve searched, it\'s only bore.
So please go over that again.
Let\'s enjoy this day. See you!
~T. Jessie~
Hello again, Jessie!
>> Correct!
Oh, do you relly think so?
>> Oh, do you really think so?
One thing I know is, since I got started the class, I improved so far.
>> Correct!
But I can also feel that my groth stops.
>> But I can also feel that my growth stops.
Whenever I sense like that, I\'m little bit disappointed.
>> Whenever I sense like that, I\'m a little bit disappointed.
Then what is the special way for my development?
>> Correct!
Do you have an idea?
>> Correct!
How could you improve yourself?
>> Correct!
I want to ask you some advice if you\'re pleased.
>> I want to ask you some advice, if you\'re please.
And I have one question.
>> Correct!
In the grammar, you fixed \'beared\' to \'bore\'.
>> In the grammar corrections you\'ve noted, you changed \'beared\' to \'bore\'.
\'Beared\' is also one of bear\'s past forms.
>> Correct!
It means that \'bear\' has two past forms.
>> Correct!
I found it in a dictionary.
>> Correct!
Please explain about it in the next class.
>> Correct!
Then see you!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
I don\'t usually enjoy an horror genre actually.
>> I don\'t usually enjoy horror genre.
But there\'s one thing that I can remember.
>> Correct!
\'REC\' was the scariest one for me.
>> \'REC\' is the scariest one for me.
It has a special filming technique and it made moive scarier.
>> It has a special filming technique and it made the movie scarier.
There\'s another movie that use the same technique.
>> There\'s another movie that used the same technique.
It\'s on the tip of my tongue...
>> Correct!
I haven\'t seen that, but it had some fame when it was released because of its technique.
>> I haven\'t seen that, but it became famous when it was released because of its technique.
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