homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Ms. [Name]!
Happy Friday once again.
Well, internet has its pros and cons and it depends on the person if it will make him or her smarter or stupid.
And in your part, it made you smarter. Right? kkk. of course. ^^
Anyway, have a nice weekend and see you next week!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Composition:Has the Internet made us smarter or more stupid?
It is half and half.
>> correct!
The internet give many information to us so we can get it anywhere.
>> The internet gives us many information so we can get it anywhere.
but when we use long time, we depend on it and we can\'t do without the internet.
>> But when we use it a long time, we depend on it and we cannot do it without the internet.
it will make us more stupid.
>> correct!
so when we check the internet, we need to control by ourselves.
>> So when we check the internet, we need to control it ourselves.
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