homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi.Erine
Now, Are you spending your happy weekend?
I am enjoying my weekend with my family.
I hope this moment would be forever. he he..^^
I don't understand the question exactly.
Who is who? Do the who mean for example teacher or mother and so on?
At first, I think that the condition of leader.
Leader should love members.
Leader should have eye to look over various situation.
Leader should try to seek public benefit not his.
Where comes like this mature person? The answer is who for leader. Every person who love others must be person who is loved. Someone who is loved is be the Who for the leader.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I think you were confused with the question in your homework.
Let me make it clearer for you.^.^
Who makes a better leader? : This is the main question.
A. Someone: This person/someone is loved. (Someone who is loved)
B. Someone: This person/someone is feared. (Someone who is feared)
The sentence patterns follow the grammar rule of Relative Clauses.
If you have time, try to refresh your thoughts about Relative Clauses
so it will be much clearer for you.
See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi.Erine>> Correct
Now, Are you spending your happy weekend?
Now, Are you spending your happy weekend?
>>Correct
I am enjoying my weekend with my family.
I am enjoying my weekend with my family.
>>Correct
I hope this moment would be forever. he he..^^
I hope this moment would be forever. he he..^^
>>I hope this moment will be forever.
I don\'t understand the question exactly.
>> Correct
Who is who?
Who is who?
>> Correct
Do the who mean for example teacher or mother and so on?
>>Does the who mean a teacher, a mother or others?
At first, I think that the condition of leader.
At first, I think that the condition of leader.
>> At first, I thought about the condition of a leader.
Leader should love members.
Leader should love members.
>> A leader should love his or her members.
Leader should have eye to look over various situation.
Leader should have eye to look over various situation.
>> He/She should have an eye to look over various situations.
Leader should try to seek public benefit not his.
Leader should try to seek public benefit not his.
>> A leader should try to seek public benefits not for himself.
Where comes like this mature person?
Where comes like this mature person?
>>Where can we find this matured person?
The answer is who for leader.
>> The answer is a leader who is loved.
Every person who love others must be person who is loved.
>> A person who love others is a person who is loved.
Someone who is loved is be the Who for the leader.
>> Someone who is loved makes a better leader.
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