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2015-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Hi, Kathrine! Everyday I am happy to study English with you. and I feel to improve my English skill. Thank you. These days I get stressed because next month I will get the English interview. so I have to study hard than other days. but English is very difficult to me. I am worried. please help me, lovely teacher!. Can you teach how to speak better English ? Composition: What is the most stressful experience you have ever had? After I gave birth my frist baby, I had to stay at home for my baby. That time I finished my job. I couldn't sleep well , study English more and meet my friend. I got a lot of stressed.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]!

Good afternoon.

Well, I am always here if you need my help.

And it is my pleasure to help you.

So if you have questions, please do not hesitate to tell me.

Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts.
Have a great day and see you tomorrow!

Always,

Kathrine ^^


HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:

Hi, Kathrine!

>> correct!
 Everyday I am happy to study English with you.

>> correct!

>> or: I am happy studying English with you everyday.

and I feel to improve my English skill. 

>> And I feel that my English skills are improving.
 Thank you.

>> correct! 
 These days I get stressed because next month I will get the English interview.

>> I am stressed out these days because next month, I will be having an English interview.

so I have to study hard than other days.

>> So I have to study harder than the other days.

but English is very difficult to me.

>> correct!
 I am worried.

>> correct! 
 please help me, lovely teacher!. 

>> correct! 
 Can you teach how to speak better English ?
>> correct!

>> or: Can you teach me how to speak in English better? 


 Composition: What is the most stressful experience you have ever had?
After I gave birth my frist baby, I had to stay at home for my baby.

>> After I gave birth to my first baby, I had to stay at home.

That time I finished my job.

>> correct! 

I couldn\'t sleep well , study English more and meet my friend.

>> correct!

I got a lot of stressed.

>> I got stressed out a lot.

>> or: I got a lot of stress.

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