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2015-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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What is the most stressful experience you have ever had? I am a person who gets stress out easily. There are many stressful experiences such as various tests, financial, between people and so on. Among these, the most stressful experience is about my job. I am a teacher. I should teach the stodents properly. But sometimes I am lazy and I don't study about my teaching skills. It really shows in my class. However, Nobody says that you have to prepare more for your class or you need to study more. But my shoulders are really heavy because I am the one of the person who effects them positively or nagertively. It is ok to fail for me because that is caused by me. I am afraid and stressed out what if I effects the students badly.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

As they say, teachers are the epitome of perfection.

Sounds like teachers have to be perfect all the time because they know should know the rules and they should teach perfectly to their students.

But of course, sometimes, we really tend to be lazy and it is stressful if it shows during the class.

I could not blame you for feeling stressed out because of this.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts Ms. [이름]!

Enjoy the rest of the day!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


What is the most stressful experience you have ever had?

I am a person who gets stress out easily. 

>> correct!
 There are many stressful experiences such as various tests, financial, between people and so on.

>>  I had many experiences which are stressful such as various test, financial problems, relationship with other people and so on.

Among these, the most stressful experience is about my job.

>> correct! 
 I am a teacher.

>> correct!

 I should teach the stodents properly.

>> correct! (students)

But sometimes I am lazy and I don\'t study about my teaching skills.

>> But I become lazy sometimes and I do not study the lessons that I teach.

It really shows in my class.

>> It really shows in my class and in the way I teach.

However,  Nobody says that you have to prepare more for your class or you need to study more.

>> correct! 

>> or: However, nobody would say that I have to prepare more in for my class and I need to study more.
 But my shoulders are really heavy because I am the one of the person who effects them positively or nagertively.

>> but my shoulders are really heavy because I am the one who would affect them positively or negatively.

It is ok to fail for me because that is caused by me.

>> It is okay for me to fail because I am the one who caused it.
 I am afraid and stressed out what if I effects the students badly.

>> I am afraid and stressed out thinking if it could affect the students badly.

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