homework
학생이 쓴 원문
When I came back to the past, I wanted to 10years ago, in Everland.
Everland is the amusement park, which was the oldest in korea the amusement park.
And that time, the big wheel is turning every day.
But now the big wheel is retired.
I want to ride the big wheel.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Interesting answer. ^^ Good job in answering the topic. I googled about Everland and wow, it\'s the biggest theme park in South Koreal; it even has a zoo in it. 0.0!
See you in class. ^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
When I came back to the past, I wanted to 10years ago, in Everland.
>> If given the chance to go back in time, I would want to go to Everland ten years ago.Everland is the amusement park, which was the oldest in korea the amusement park.
>> Everland is an amusement park which is the oldest in Korea.And that time, the big wheel is turning every day.But now the big wheel is retired.
>> At that time, there is a big ferris wheel that turns every day however this is now decommissioned.I want to ride the big wheel.
>> I want to ride that big ferries wheel, that is why I chose that place and time if I get a chance to return to the past.
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