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2015-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I want to meet the Tomas Sangster. He acts 'newtus' in 'maze runner'. When I first saw him in screen, my eyes is clear up~

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    Hi [이름]! ^^ I\'m not sure if Thomas Sangster is a famous person in history although he is a famous person nowadays. If you take a look, from this essay to the previous essays you sent today, the corrections were minimal where it focused on improving the comprehensibility and articulateness of the essay. I will see you in class. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==       I want to meet the Tomas Sangster. >> I would like to meet Thomas Sangster if I could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history.He acts \'newtus\' in \'maze runner\'. >> Thomas Sangster is the actor who plays  Newt in the movie \"Maze Runner\".When I first saw him in screen, my eyes is clear up~ >> When I first saw him onscreen, my eyes cleared up.  

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