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2015-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN SIX SENTENCES: Is torture ever a good option? If no, why not? If yes, when? =============================================================== I think torture is not a good option and is not fair that punish to body. All people have a ability about think , understand. So, if we conciliate to criminal, may be they will fix the their thought. also we have lots of way to punishmenet. all people have a right to become a happy even if criminal. torture is worst method in world.

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Good Morning, [이름]! Thank you for this accomplished homework! I am happy to know that you were able to check your evaluation. Thank you for spending time to read it. I will talk to you later. Take care -T.Faye   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: >> CORRECT:ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN SIX SENTENCES: >> CORRECT:Is torture ever a good option? If no, why not? If yes, when? >> CORRECT:===============================================================I think torture is not a good option and is not fair that punish to body. >> I think torture is not a good option and it\'s not fair to punish to anybody.All people have a ability about think , understand. >> All people have ability to think and understand. So, if we conciliate to criminal, may be they will fix the their thought. >>  So, if we conciliate to criminal, maybe they will be able to have a change of thought.also we have lots of way to punishmenet. >> Also we have lots of way to punish.all people have a right to become a happy even if criminal. >>All people have the right to become happy even criminal.torture is worst method in world. >> Torture is a worst punishment method in the world.

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