HOMEWORK
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN SIX SENTENCES:
Is torture ever a good option? If no, why not? If yes, when?
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I think torture is not a good option and is not fair that punish to body.
All people have a ability about think , understand.
So, if we conciliate to criminal, may be they will fix the their thought.
also we have lots of way to punishmenet.
all people have a right to become a happy even if criminal.
torture is worst method in world.
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
>> CORRECT:ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN SIX SENTENCES:
>> CORRECT:Is torture ever a good option? If no, why not? If yes, when?
>> CORRECT:===============================================================I think torture is not a good option and is not fair that punish to body.
>> I think torture is not a good option and it\'s not fair to punish to anybody.All people have a ability about think , understand.
>> All people have ability to think and understand. So, if we conciliate to criminal, may be they will fix the their thought.
>> So, if we conciliate to criminal, maybe they will be able to have a change of thought.also we have lots of way to punishmenet.
>> Also we have lots of way to punish.all people have a right to become a happy even if criminal.
>>All people have the right to become happy even criminal.torture is worst method in world.
>> Torture is a worst punishment method in the world.
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