Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hey, Jessie! It's the time to talk with you here again.
I want to ask one. In the grammar, I said 'Whose name after for their child' and you fixed to 'Whose family name will the child take', is it also a right sentence to say 'Whose first name do you name after'? I often get confused when I make these question sentences, I think, and I want to fix these confusing ones.
See you tomorrow and I appreciate for your advice of course.
<Essay>
I think that the most profitable way for business is to import. My country is surrounded by sea. So there's no doubt that import is the best way. We're even so close with China and Japan, the most powerful countries in economy. I believe that the trade abroad have made my country affluent.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Thanks for sharing your opinion about business.
I corrected the sentences. I hope I got your idea correctly.
I know it is really hard to construct questions so you have to be familiar with the patterns. Maybe you know it already so what I want you to do is to read English novels or stories so you will be more familiar with it.
Enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hey, Jessie!
>> Correct!
It\'s the time to talk with you here again.
>> It\'s time to communicate with you here again.
I want to ask one.
>> I want to ask one question.
In the grammar, I said \'Whose name after for their child\' and you fixed to \'Whose family name will the child take\', is it also a right sentence to say \'Whose first name do you name after\'?
>> In the grammar corrections, I said \'Whose name after for their child\' and you fixed it to \'Whose family name will the child take?\', is it also a right sentence to say \'Whose first name do you name after\'?
>> I think it\'s still best to say \'Whose family name will the child take?\'. Actually the sentence \'Whose first name do you name after\'? is confusing.
I often get confused when I make these question sentences, I think, and I want to fix these confusing ones.
>> I often get confused when I make these questions, I think, and I want to fix these confusing ones.
See you tomorrow and I appreciate for your advice of course.
>> See you tomorrow and I appreciate your advice of course.
<Essay>
I think that the most profitable way for business is to import.
>> I think that the most profitable business is to import.
My country is surrounded by sea.
>> Correct!
So there\'s no doubt that import is the best way.
>> Correct!
We\'re even so close with China and Japan, the most powerful countries in economy.
>> Correct!
I believe that the trade abroad have made my country affluent.
>> Correct!
Thanks for sharing your opinion about business.
I corrected the sentences. I hope I got your idea correctly.
I know it is really hard to construct questions so you have to be familiar with the patterns. Maybe you know it already so what I want you to do is to read English novels or stories so you will be more familiar with it.
Enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hey, Jessie!
>> Correct!
It\'s the time to talk with you here again.
>> It\'s time to communicate with you here again.
I want to ask one.
>> I want to ask one question.
In the grammar, I said \'Whose name after for their child\' and you fixed to \'Whose family name will the child take\', is it also a right sentence to say \'Whose first name do you name after\'?
>> In the grammar corrections, I said \'Whose name after for their child\' and you fixed it to \'Whose family name will the child take?\', is it also a right sentence to say \'Whose first name do you name after\'?
>> I think it\'s still best to say \'Whose family name will the child take?\'. Actually the sentence \'Whose first name do you name after\'? is confusing.
I often get confused when I make these question sentences, I think, and I want to fix these confusing ones.
>> I often get confused when I make these questions, I think, and I want to fix these confusing ones.
See you tomorrow and I appreciate for your advice of course.
>> See you tomorrow and I appreciate your advice of course.
<Essay>
I think that the most profitable way for business is to import.
>> I think that the most profitable business is to import.
My country is surrounded by sea.
>> Correct!
So there\'s no doubt that import is the best way.
>> Correct!
We\'re even so close with China and Japan, the most powerful countries in economy.
>> Correct!
I believe that the trade abroad have made my country affluent.
>> Correct!
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