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2015-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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I don't agree that tourists pay an additional tax to compensate for environmental damage. Tourism is enormous business for countries. countries earn a foreign currency through tourist industry. for example , my country have gotten a profit economically from Hallyu cultural contents industry. A lot of tourist have visited my country for looking at hallyu contents such as singer concert, filming set and so on. they lavish money on them. what a economical things for country! In many ways, country benefit from tourism. Also, Government of country run a tourism. So country have to pay a additional tax to compensate for environment damage. country should not collect a superfluous tax from people. That is to say, Tourist need not to have a responsibility to problems of tourism. But they should have a sense of guilt. Better or not, their activities have a negative effect on environment of country that they visited.

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Very well said! Indeed, tourism has played a vital role in economic world but it also brings several kinds of problem such as the damage of environment. Well, I understand your point and I respect it. I am impressed the way how you expressed your opinions. Keep it up! Anyway, enjoy the rest of your evening. So, just seat back and relax for now. -Teacher Chloe I don\'t agree that tourists pay an additional tax to compensate for environmental damage. >>I don\'t agree that tourists have to pay an additional tax to compensate the environmental damage. Tourism is enormous business for countries. >>Tourism is an enormous business for countries. countries earn a foreign currency through tourist industry. >>Countries earn different currencies through tourist industry. for example , my country have gotten a profit economically from Hallyu cultural contents industry. >>My country has economic profit from Hallyu Cultural Industry. A lot of tourist have visited my country for looking at hallyu contents such as singer concert, filming set and so on. >>A lot of tourists visit my country because of Hallyu. They come to see the Korean pop culture. they lavish money on them. >>They lavish money for it. what a economical things for country! >>Thus, it helps my country economically. In many ways, country benefit from tourism. >>In many ways, countries benefit from tourism. Also, Government of country run a tourism. >>Governments run tourism. So country have to pay a additional tax to compensate for environment damage. >>So, they have to be the ones to compensate the environmental damage. country should not collect a superfluous tax from people. >>They should not collect superflous tax from their people. That is to say, Tourist need not to have a responsibility to problems of tourism. >>So, tourists are not responsible to compensate the environmental damage. But they should have a sense of guilt. >>But, they have the sense of guilt. Better or not, their activities have a negative effect on environment of country that they visited. >>That is when their activities have negative effects in the environment.  

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