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I don't agree that tourists pay an additional tax to compensate for environmental damage. Tourism is enormous business for countries. countries earn a foreign currency through tourist industry. for example , my country have gotten a profit economically from Hallyu cultural contents industry. A lot of tourist have visited my country for looking at hallyu contents such as singer concert, filming set and so on. they lavish money on them. what a economical things for country! In many ways, country benefit from tourism. Also, Government of country run a tourism. So country have to pay a additional tax to compensate for environment damage. country should not collect a superfluous tax from people. That is to say, Tourist need not to have a responsibility to problems of tourism. But they should have a sense of guilt. Better or not, their activities have a negative effect on environment of country that they visited.
강사 첨삭
Very well said! Indeed, tourism has played a vital role in economic world but it also brings several kinds of problem such as the damage of environment. Well, I understand your point and I respect it. I am impressed the way how you expressed your opinions. Keep it up! Anyway, enjoy the rest of your evening. So, just seat back and relax for now.
-Teacher Chloe
I don\'t agree that tourists pay an additional tax to compensate for environmental damage.
>>I don\'t agree that tourists have to pay an additional tax to compensate the environmental damage.
Tourism is enormous business for countries.
>>Tourism is an enormous business for countries.
countries earn a foreign currency through tourist industry.
>>Countries earn different currencies through tourist industry.
for example , my country have gotten a profit economically from Hallyu cultural contents industry.
>>My country has economic profit from Hallyu Cultural Industry.
A lot of tourist have visited my country for looking at hallyu contents such as singer concert, filming set and so on.
>>A lot of tourists visit my country because of Hallyu. They come to see the Korean pop culture.
they lavish money on them.
>>They lavish money for it.
what a economical things for country!
>>Thus, it helps my country economically.
In many ways, country benefit from tourism.
>>In many ways, countries benefit from tourism.
Also, Government of country run a tourism.
>>Governments run tourism.
So country have to pay a additional tax to compensate for environment damage.
>>So, they have to be the ones to compensate the environmental damage.
country should not collect a superfluous tax from people.
>>They should not collect superflous tax from their people.
That is to say, Tourist need not to have a responsibility to problems of tourism.
>>So, tourists are not responsible to compensate the environmental damage.
But they should have a sense of guilt.
>>But, they have the sense of guilt.
Better or not, their activities have a negative effect on environment of country that they visited.
>>That is when their activities have negative effects in the environment.
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