HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN SIX SENTENCES:
What’s the best decision you ever made?
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When i failed the test that become a teacher, i decided to go seoul.
that time, my best friend helped me.
she shared the she's room and search the job together.
so, i settled the seoul.
being live the seoul, i experience lots of contents
i go to frequently museum and gallery when i moved the seoul.
sometimes,lived the seoul is hard that city is very busy, rent fee of house is very expensive.
but i do not regret to move the seoul.
i love the this city and enjoyed the enough.
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday!
One more day and it\'s friday, already!
You can rest and sleep for a long time. :)
Anyways, thank you for accomplishing this homework!
With your experienced, I can see that in every failure, there\'s always a success.
And that, there\'s always a reason for everything that happens. :)
-T.Faye
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
>> CORRECT:ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN SIX SENTENCES:
>> CORRECT:What’s the best decision you ever made?>> CORRECT:===================================================When i failed the test that become a teacher, i decided to go seoul.
>> When i failed the test in becoming a teacher, I decided to go to Seoul.that time, my best friend helped me.
>> That time, my best friend helped me.she shared the she\'s room and search the job together.>> She shared her room and we searched job together.
so, i settled the seoul.
>> So, I settled in Seoul.being live the seoul, i experience lots of contents
>> By living in Seoul, I have experienced a lot.
i go to frequently museum and gallery when i moved the seoul.
>> I frequently go to museum and gallery when I moved in seoul.sometimes,lived the seoul is hard that city is very busy, rent fee of house is very expensive.
>> Sometimes, living in Seoul is hard, that city is very busy and the rent fee of the house is very expensive.but i do not regret to move the seoul.
>> But, I don\'t regret moving to Seoul.i love the this city and enjoyed the enough.
>> I love this city and I enjoyed living here, that\'s enough.
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