HOMEWORK

2015-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN SIX SENTENCES: What’s the best decision you ever made? =================================================== When i failed the test that become a teacher, i decided to go seoul. that time, my best friend helped me. she shared the she's room and search the job together. so, i settled the seoul. being live the seoul, i experience lots of contents i go to frequently museum and gallery when i moved the seoul. sometimes,lived the seoul is hard that city is very busy, rent fee of house is very expensive. but i do not regret to move the seoul. i love the this city and enjoyed the enough.

강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday! One more day and it\'s friday, already! You can rest and sleep for a long time. :)   Anyways, thank you for accomplishing this homework! With your experienced, I can see that in every failure, there\'s always a success. And that, there\'s always a reason for everything that happens. :) -T.Faye   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: >> CORRECT:ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN SIX SENTENCES: >> CORRECT:What’s the best decision you ever made?>> CORRECT:===================================================When i failed the test that become a teacher, i decided to go seoul. >> When i failed the test in becoming a teacher, I decided to go to Seoul.that time, my best friend helped me. >> That time, my best friend helped me.she shared the she\'s room and search the job together.>> She shared her room and we searched job together. so, i settled the seoul. >> So, I settled in Seoul.being live the seoul, i experience lots of contents >> By living in Seoul, I have experienced a lot. i go to frequently museum and gallery when i moved the seoul. >> I frequently go to museum and gallery when I moved in seoul.sometimes,lived the seoul is hard that city is very busy, rent fee of house is very expensive. >> Sometimes, living in Seoul is hard, that city is very busy and the rent fee of the house is very expensive.but i do not regret to move the seoul. >> But, I don\'t regret moving to Seoul.i love the this city and enjoyed the enough. >> I love this city and I enjoyed living here, that\'s enough.

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