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2015-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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The destruction of the world's forests is inevitable as our need for land and food grows. Do you agree? I don't agree that the destruction of the world's forests is inevitable. Though we need land and food, that doesn't mean we can destroy our forests. We should not destroy world's forests. The forests help earth to be stay in clean. However, if we don't stop destroying the world's forests, someday we cannot live in the earth because of enviroment pollution. So, we should try to keep the world's forests.

강사 첨삭

I agree with you. We must protect the world\'s forests. I think we can slow the destruction of the forests by making smarter decisions. Either way, it is inevitable until people realize that the world is getting over populated and we need to do something about it. Not later but  now. -Teacher Chloe The destruction of the world\'s forests is inevitable as our need for land and food grows. Do you agree?I don\'t agree that the destruction of the world\'s forests is inevitable. >>Correct! Though we need land and food, that doesn\'t mean we can destroy our forests. >>Correct! We should not destroy world\'s forests. >>We should not destroy the world\'s forests. The forests help earth to be stay in clean. >>The forests help Earth to stay in clean. However, if we don\'t stop destroying the world\'s forests, someday we cannot live in the earth because of enviroment pollution. >>If we never stop destroying the world\'s forests, the Earth would become unliveable someday. So, we should try to keep the world\'s forests. >>Correct!

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