homework
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What single experience do you think every human being should have, one without which human life, in your opinion, would not be complete?
I think marriage is an experience that every human being should have. One person who is grown up frome their family, should make their family by marriage. Now days many people doesn't marry, and live by himself or herself. However, without experience of marriage. I think thier life would not be complete. I think people change a lot after marriage, they grow while having their own family. And I think it is very important experience to have resposiability of family. That is why I believe human life without marriage would not be complete.
강사 첨삭
Oh wonderful!
You are really in favor of marriage.
To get married is a very important event for almost everyone.
Especially for women, marriage and giving a birth could be the two biggest events of their lives.
Anyway, have a good night!
Take a rest now and sleep well!
-Teacher Chloe
What single experience do you think every human being should have, one without which human life, in your opinion, would not be complete? I think marriage is an experience that every human being should have.
>>Correct!
One person who is grown up frome their family, should make their family by marriage.
>>Everyone should experience marriage and make their own family.
Now days many people doesn\'t marry, and live by himself or herself.
>>Nowadays, many people don\'t marry and just like by themselves.
However, without experience of marriage. I think thier life would not be complete.
>>However, without experiencing marriage, I think life would be incomplete.
I think people change a lot after marriage, they grow while having their own family.
>>I think people change a lot after marriage. As they grow, they become more mature with their own family.
And I think it is very important experience to have resposiability of family.
>>Also, I think that the most important thing is the experience of having responsibilities
That is why I believe human life without marriage would not be complete.
>>That is why I believe that without marriage in human life, it would be incomplete.
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