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2015-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Barbara

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If I could be another person for a day,I want to be a history professor in university.The reason that I want to do so is because at the end,my dream is to be a history teacher.So I just want to see a litle preview about my job to see whether that it's a worthly job to do and many more other things.It will be a great thing to do,and in my private opinion,It will be a fun thing to do.Because to be another person that has the same job as you will have in the future means that it will just act as the blue print for your future job.

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Hi [이름]!   That\'s good! That\'s nice to experience, I think so. So that you\'ll know something about it. It would be really interesting in your part. If only it could happen. You can have it in your dreams, too.   T. Barbara**,   If I could be another person for a day,I want to be a history professor in university. >> If I could be another person for a day, I want to be a history professor in a university. The reason that I want to do so is because at the end,my dream is to be a history teacher. >> The reason that I want to do so is because at the end, my dream is to be a history teacher. So I just want to see a litle preview about my job to see whether that it\'s a worthly job to do and many more other things. >> So I just want to see a litle preview about my job to see whether it\'s a worthly job to do and many other things. It will be a great thing to do,and in my private opinion,It will be a fun thing to do. >> It will be a great thing to do and in my opinion, It will be a fun thing to do. Because to be another person that has the same job as you will have in the future means that it will just act as the blue print for your future job. >> It\'s because to be another person that has the same job as you will have in the future means that it will just act as the blue print for your future job.

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