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2015-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello there Jessie! I think that I've heard of what you said but details. So it's quite surprising to read the description which you mentioned. I counted all alphabet to check if what you said is real, it's really true! Wow..! And it's also surprising that 'alphabet' came from two letters, alpha and beta. I just remember that I used 'delta' as my code name in a games. kkk And rhyming words are a little confusing for me first, but I understand now. Perhaps... haha I really need to read something in English as you said. It's really helpful for me to improve myself. Hah ah... Recently I do feel that I become more lazy than I expected. I shouldn't do like this! :'( Then see you tomrrow! <Essay> Stroke is one of the worst disease I think. It makes a human not to be able to do anything that a person is going to behave. So a person is paralyzed absolutely, and when it is worse, a person can't be awake, even don't know what he/she is like dementia. It's awful!

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Good morning! I think you had fun reading the facts. ^_^ I\'m glad to know that. Please try not to be lazy.^_^ Well, I still commend you because nowadays, you are really trying your best to attend our class. Good job. I corrected your sentences. I just hope that I got your ideas correctly. Let\'s talk again tomorrow. See you! ~T. Jessie~ Hello there Jessie!>> Correct!I think that I\'ve heard of what you said but details. >> I think that I\'ve heard of what you said but I need details. So it\'s quite surprising to read the description which you mentioned. >> Correct! I counted all alphabet to check if what you said is real, it\'s really true! >> I counted all the alphabet to check if what you said is real, it\'s really true! Wow..! And it\'s also surprising that \'alphabet\' came from two letters, alpha and beta. >> Correct! I just remember that I used \'delta\' as my code name in a games. kkk >> I just remember that I used \'delta\' as my code name in games. kkk And rhyming words are a little confusing for me first, but I understand now. >> And the rhyming words are a little confusing for me at first, but I understand now. Perhaps... haha >> Correct! I really need to read something in English as you said. >> Correct! It\'s really helpful for me to improve myself. >> Correct! Hah ah... Recently I do feel that I become more lazy than I expected. >> Hah ah... Recently I do feel that I becoming  lazier than I expected. I shouldn\'t do like this! :\'( >> I shouldn\'t do this! :\'( OR>> I shouldn\'t be like this! :\'(Then see you tomrrow! >> Correct!<Essay>Stroke is one of the worst disease I think. >> Stroke is one of the worst diseases I think. It makes a human not to be able to do anything that a person is going to behave. >> Do you mean: It makes a human not to be able to do anything that a person usually does. So a person is paralyzed absolutely, and when it is worse, a person can\'t be awake, even don\'t know what he/she is like dementia. >> Do you mean: So a person is absolutely paralyzed, and when it is worse, a person can\'t be awake. We don\'t even know if she will suffer from dementia. It\'s awful! >> Correct!  

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