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2015-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Have you ever had a great conversation with a complete stranger? What made it so great? What did you talk about? No, I have not. Unfortunately I haven't had a great conversation with a complete stranger. I am not so active when I am with strangers. I am only active and jolly when I feel very confortable. I don't enjoy to talk with people who are not related with me. I think that it is also wasting of my time. It is too nagative idea but it is also dangerous to talk with strangers.ㅜㅜ

강사 첨삭

Hello again Ms. [이름]!

I hope that your day is still going very well.

Well, it feels likes the movies when you have a great conversation with a stranger. haha

But the t[이름] is, there is no situation like this one. ^^

Anyway, thanks for your time again see you tomorrow!

Take care!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Have you ever had a great conversation with a complete stranger?
What made it so great? What did you talk about?

No, I have not. Unfortunately I haven\'t had a great conversation with a complete stranger.

>> correct!

I am not so active when I am with strangers.

>> correct!

I am only active and jolly when I feel very confortable.

>> correct!  (comfortable)
 I don\'t enjoy to talk with people who are not related with me. 

>> I do not enjoy talking with people who are not related with me.
 I think that it is also wasting of my time.

>> I think that it is also a waste of my time. 
>> or: I think that I am also wasting my time.

 It is too nagative idea but it is also dangerous to talk with strangers.ㅜㅜ

>> correct!

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