homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello again Ms. [이름]!
I hope that your day is still going very well.
Well, it feels likes the movies when you have a great conversation with a stranger. haha
But the t[이름] is, there is no situation like this one. ^^
Anyway, thanks for your time again see you tomorrow!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Have you ever had a great conversation with a complete stranger?
What made it so great? What did you talk about?
No, I have not. Unfortunately I haven\'t had a great conversation with a complete stranger.
>> correct!
I am not so active when I am with strangers.
>> correct!
I am only active and jolly when I feel very confortable.
>> correct! (comfortable)
I don\'t enjoy to talk with people who are not related with me.
>> I do not enjoy talking with people who are not related with me.
I think that it is also wasting of my time.
>> I think that it is also a waste of my time.
>> or: I think that I am also wasting my time.
It is too nagative idea but it is also dangerous to talk with strangers.ㅜㅜ
>> correct!
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