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2015-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

hi teacher ^^ i'm English is still far from perfect. a lot, difficult. ㅠ.ㅠ ※HOMEWORK my family 6 people. mother, father, big sister 2, younger bother. sum 6 people my think is... parents is great teacher. because, learning at school do not. my parents give teach. for ex) greatest love, forgiveness, trust i have a learn. so, i'm love. my big sister 2, and this family inclusive and, in the difficulty find happy. this at all/ my parents gave me this teach. In fact, I wanted to process from children.ㅠ.ㅠ effort but do not know if well Help me a lot ㅠ.ㅠ More difficult still thanks. teacher ♥

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ How are you? Thank you for the message. :) Please don\'t give up learning English, okay. Like I said, let us do it little by little. Just be patient, okay. :) By the way, please study and practice the following corrections. Goodluck and see you my dear! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris   my family 6 people.mother, father, big sister 2, younger bother. >> My family consists of 6 members: mother, father, 2 older sisters and 1 younger brother.sum 6 people>> We are all 6.my think is...parents is great teacher. >> I think parents are great teachers.because, learning at school do not. >> Because, they do not learn everything in school.my parents give teach. for ex) greatest love, forgiveness, trust i have a learn.>> My parents teach us great things like greatest love, forgiveness and trust.so, i\'m love. my big sister 2, and this family inclusive >> So, I love my 2 sisters and my family as a whole.and, in the difficulty find happy. >> Be happy always even in times of difficulty.this at all/ my parents gave me this teach.>> My parents teach me all of these.In fact, I wanted to process from children.ㅠ.ㅠ >> In fact, I want to pass it to my children.effort but do not know if well >> I will take effort if to do it. +Help me a lot ㅠ.ㅠ >> Help me.More difficult still>> It is still difficult.

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