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2015-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hello, Nina! How are you today? I work new project with my collegue(Jayden:your student^^) from this week. So, I will be very busy and work a lot of tasks. As I said yesterday, I was looking for my new apartment. I decided a new apartment and will contract this weekend. Anyway my homework is as follows. "When was the last time you forgot where something important was?" When I went a department store with my wife I lost my gold ring. It was our coupling ring(not wedding ring). When I went a department toilet, I get my ring off. So, my girlfriend(at the time, we were a courting couple) was very angry. We tried to find it, but we didn't find it. I bought a new gold ring and appolized to her. Thank you for your feedbacks. Have a nice day.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

Good luck on your new project.

I know you can do it.

I hope that you will have a lot of good memories in your new apartment.

Oh! Thanks for sharing that story. I think if I were in that situation too.

I will be really mad and of course, I won\'t talk to that guy again. Hihihi.

Have a great day, Take care!

Teacher Nina


Hello, Nina!
>> correct
How are you today?
>> correct
I work new project with my collegue(Jayden:your student^^) from this week.
>> I will work on a new project with my colleague, Jayden your student starting this week.
So, I will be very busy and work a lot of tasks.
>> So, I will be very busy and do a lot of tasks at work.
As I said yesterday, I was looking for my new apartment.
>> As I said yesterday, I am currently looking for a new apartment.
I decided a new apartment and will contract this weekend.
>> I decided to sign a contract this weekend.

>> I decided to sign the apartment lease contract this weekend.


Anyway my homework is as follows.

\"When was the last time you forgot where something important was?\"

When I went a department store with my wife I lost my gold ring.
>> When I went to the department store with my wife, I lose my gold ring.
It was our coupling ring(not wedding ring).
>> It was our couple ring.
When I went a department toilet, I get my ring off.
>> I removed it when I was in the toilet.

>> I removed it when I went to the restroom.
So, my girlfriend(at the time, we were a courting couple) was very angry.
>> So my girl friend was very angry.

>> So, my female friend was very mad. (It is better to say female friend if you are not yet a couple. Because as you mentioned, you are still courting her at that time.)
We tried to find it, but we didn\'t find it.
>> We tried to look for it, it wasn\'t successful.

>> We tried to look for it but we didn\'t find it.
I bought a new gold ring and appolized to her.
>> I bought a new gold ring and a apologized to her.
Thank you for your feedbacks.
>> Thank you for you feedback.
Have a nice day.

>> correct

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