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2015-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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How do you humans affect the environment? In agricultural age, human being coexisted with nature for a long time. But, human being have been exploiting a mother nature since the Indutrial evolution. nowadays environment was contaminated with people seriously. human have negative effect on enviroment. so some people try to recover a contiminated nature. Thanks to their effort to recover the environment, we can live in comfort so far. That is to say, human have to preserve the environment.

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Let me share you this: \"We all want to protect our planet, but we\'re mostly too busy or too lazy to put up big change that would improve our lifestyle and save the environment.\" - Seven Ways To Protect The Environment. True enough, it is hard for us to do good things to protect the environment. Maybe, it is because we are used to a \"convenient life\". Nowadays, there are only a few concerned citizens who are eager to make a big change for the preservation and protection of the environment. Anyway, start the change from ourselves. -Teacher Chloe How do you humans affect the environment?In agricultural age, human being coexisted with nature for a long time. >>In the agricultural age, human beings coexisted with the nature a long time ago. But, human being have been exploiting a mother nature since the Indutrial evolution.>>But, human beings have been exploiting the mother nature since the industrial age. nowadays environment was contaminated with people seriously. >>Nowadays, the environment is being contaminated because of people. human have negative effect on enviroment. >>Human beings have negative effects to the environment. >>Human beings negatively afftect the environment. so some people try to recover a contiminated nature.>>So, some people try to recover and revive contaminated nature.Thanks to their effort to recover the environment, we can live in comfort so far. >>Thank you for their effort, we can live in comfort so far. That is to say, human have to preserve the environment. >>So, we have to preserve and protect the enviroment.

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