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2015-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. When babies are born, they hear voice of their parent in first time. While they grow up, they hear voice of their parent. And they start to speak like their parent. Also they read a book with their parent and they learn how to write. So, I think that their first teacher and their best teacher is their parent.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ I agree with you that our parents are our best teachers. So, in return, we have to help them as well. Love our parents by taking good care of them. By the way, [이름], please study the following corrections, okay. Take care! See you! ^^   ~~Teacher Kris     When babies are born, they hear voice of their parent in first time. >> When babies are born, they can hear their parents voices for the first time. While they grow up, they hear voice of their parent. >> While they are growing up, they still hear the voices of their parents.And they start to speak like their parent. >> And they start to talk like their parents.Also they read a book with their parent and they learn how to write. >> Also, they will learn how to read with their parents and they will learn how to write.So, I think that their first teacher and their best teacher is their parent. >> So, I think that their first teacher and their best teacher are their parents.

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