HOMEWORK
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN SIX SENTENCES:
What’s the biggest personal change you’ve ever made?
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i started exercise and decided the losed the weight whatis the biggest personal change.
before started exeircise, i hated exercise and moved the body.
almost i sit down whedn i work.
so, i gain the weight, i sick the waist.
that time, my friend recommneded the ballet class.
after started the ballet class, i feel more the health.
my body get to be strong.
also, i enjoyed to go to outside and change the character that i am more the outgoing.
강사 첨삭
Good Morning, [이름]!
Happy Friday!
What\'s your plan?
Are you going out with friends?
I hope that you\'ll enjoy your Friday. :)
I\'ll talk to you later.
Take care!
-T.Faye
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
>> CORRECT:ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN SIX SENTENCES:
>> CORRECT:What’s the biggest personal change you’ve ever made?
>> CORRECT:=========================================================i started exercise and decided the losed the weight whatis the biggest personal change.
>> I started exercising and decided to lose weight that becomes my biggest personal change. before started exeircise, i hated exercise and moved the body.
>> Before I started exercising, I hated exercise and moving my body.almost i sit down whedn i work.
>> I sit down when I work.so, i gain the weight, i sick the waist.
>> So, i gained weight, I hated my waist.that time, my friend recommneded the ballet class.
>> That time, my friend recommended the ballet class.after started the ballet class, i feel more the health.
>> After I started the ballet class, I feel that I\'m healthier.my body get to be strong.
>> My body becomes stronger.also, i enjoyed to go to outside and change the character that i am more the outgoing. >> Also, i enjoyed going outside and being an outgoing person.
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