HOMEWORK

2015-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN SIX SENTENCES: What’s the biggest personal change you’ve ever made? ========================================================= i started exercise and decided the losed the weight whatis the biggest personal change. before started exeircise, i hated exercise and moved the body. almost i sit down whedn i work. so, i gain the weight, i sick the waist. that time, my friend recommneded the ballet class. after started the ballet class, i feel more the health. my body get to be strong. also, i enjoyed to go to outside and change the character that i am more the outgoing.

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Good Morning, [이름]! Happy Friday! What\'s your plan? Are you going out with friends? I hope that you\'ll enjoy your Friday. :) I\'ll talk to you later. Take care! -T.Faye   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: >> CORRECT:ANSWER IN NOT MORE THAN SIX SENTENCES: >> CORRECT:What’s the biggest personal change you’ve ever made? >> CORRECT:=========================================================i started exercise and decided the losed the weight whatis the biggest personal change. >> I  started exercising and decided to lose weight that becomes my biggest personal change. before started exeircise, i hated exercise and moved the body. >> Before I started exercising, I hated exercise and moving my body.almost i sit down whedn i work. >> I sit down when I work.so, i gain the weight, i sick the waist. >> So, i gained weight, I hated my waist.that time, my friend recommneded the ballet class. >> That time, my friend recommended the ballet class.after started the ballet class, i feel more the health. >> After I started the ballet class, I feel that I\'m healthier.my body get to be strong. >> My body becomes stronger.also, i enjoyed to go to outside and change the character that i am more the outgoing. >> Also, i enjoyed  going outside and being an outgoing person.

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