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2015-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hi there, Jessie! It's always happy for us to meet another weekend like what you said, even if a weekday is almost same for me. I say, it is a kind of power of a weekend. So I'm really excited to meet a new weekend! And I think that you look same. Let's enjoy the end of this week too! <Essay> I remember that I went for a picnic with my parent to a river side. I was riding a child's tricycle and my parent enjoyed walking around. This memory really makes me feel good even though it can be said trivial. I like that time. Oh.. Falling into a memory looks a litte bit enough to make me happy.

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Good morning! Indeed! We are always excited for the weekend. Well,  once again, I can take a rest like you.^-^ Thanks for sharing that wonderful memory. I believe that you can still make a lot of happy memories with your parents. Enjoy this weekend! ~T. Jessie~ Hi  there, Jessie! >> Correct!It\'s always happy for us to meet another weekend like what you said, even if a weekday is almost same for me. >> We are always happy to have another weekend like what you said, even if the weekdays are almost the same for me. I say, it is a kind of power of a weekend. >> I say, it is the power of the weekend. So I\'m really excited to meet a new weekend! >> Correct!And I think that you look same. >> And I think that you feel the same way.Let\'s enjoy the end of this week too!>> Correct! <Essay>I remember that I went for a picnic with my parent to a river side. >> I remember that I went on a picnic with my parents to a river side. I was riding a child\'s tricycle and my parent enjoyed walking around. >> I was riding a child\'s tricycle and my parents enjoyed walking around. This memory really makes me feel good even though it can be said trivial. >> Correct!I like that time. >> Correct!Oh.. Falling into a memory looks a litte bit enough to make me happy. >> Falling into a memory makes me a litte bit happy. OR>> Thinking about this memory  is enough to make me happy.

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