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Hi there, Jessie!
It's always happy for us to meet another weekend like what you said, even if a weekday is almost same for me. I say, it is a kind of power of a weekend. So I'm really excited to meet a new weekend! And I think that you look same.
Let's enjoy the end of this week too!
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I remember that I went for a picnic with my parent to a river side. I was riding a child's tricycle and my parent enjoyed walking around. This memory really makes me feel good even though it can be said trivial. I like that time. Oh.. Falling into a memory looks a litte bit enough to make me happy.
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Indeed! We are always excited for the weekend.
Well, once again, I can take a rest like you.^-^
Thanks for sharing that wonderful memory.
I believe that you can still make a lot of happy memories with your parents.
Enjoy this weekend!
~T. Jessie~
Hi there, Jessie!
>> Correct!It\'s always happy for us to meet another weekend like what you said, even if a weekday is almost same for me.
>> We are always happy to have another weekend like what you said, even if the weekdays are almost the same for me.
I say, it is a kind of power of a weekend.
>> I say, it is the power of the weekend.
So I\'m really excited to meet a new weekend!
>> Correct!And I think that you look same.
>> And I think that you feel the same way.Let\'s enjoy the end of this week too!>> Correct!
<Essay>I remember that I went for a picnic with my parent to a river side.
>> I remember that I went on a picnic with my parents to a river side.
I was riding a child\'s tricycle and my parent enjoyed walking around.
>> I was riding a child\'s tricycle and my parents enjoyed walking around.
This memory really makes me feel good even though it can be said trivial.
>> Correct!I like that time.
>> Correct!Oh.. Falling into a memory looks a litte bit enough to make me happy.
>> Falling into a memory makes me a litte bit happy.
OR>> Thinking about this memory is enough to make me happy.
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