homework
학생이 쓴 원문
hi teacher!
yesterday, english call time.
becaus noise in very call. i didn't hear well. T.T
to teacher i'm have something i want to talk to you about.
of taacher all talking. i didn't understand.
listening to words, knows to the feel. T.T
i'm still the children's levels. ^^;;;
please recommend a movie to me.^^
slowly one one try.
※HOMEWORK
this is not confined to the question of the TV.
smartphone, computer game or.... this fell
naturally, their communication is reduced.
this all seeing. reduce naturally communication increase.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
I am sorry that you couldn\'t hear me clearly yesterday. I will try my best to solve the problem, okay.
I just advised you to be patient, okay.
By the way, I would like you to watch English animation movies like Frozen, Tinkerbell, how to train your dragon and many more.
Or you can visit this website, onlinemovies.pro. You can see lots of English movies on that website.
Enjoy watching! ^^
Take care! ^^
See you! ^^
~~Teacher Kris
yesterday, english call time.becaus noise in very call. i didn\'t hear well. T.T
>> Yesterday\'s English class, I couldn\'t hear you very well because I can hear noises. to teacher i\'m have something i want to talk to you about.of taacher all talking. i didn\'t understand.
>> So, teacher I will tell you something; I can hear some other teachers talking so I couldn\'t understand what you were saying.listening to words, knows to the feel. T.T
>> Listening to the words made me feel very down.i\'m still the children\'s levels. ^^;;;>> I\'m still at the children\'s level.please recommend a movie to me.^^
>> Please recommend a movie.slowly one one try.
>> I will try it slowly.
this is not confined to the question of the TV.
>> This is not associated with question about TV.smartphone, computer game or.... this fell naturally, their communication is reduced.>> Smart phones, computer games. etc., can reduce one\'s coommunication.this all seeing. reduce naturally communication increase.
>> If we reduce the usage of these gadgets and other electronic devices then communication with other people will increase.
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