homework

Hi TOM!

Happy Friday!

Thanks for a fun week learning with you.

High five for your performance this week!

I encourage you to use more than two dictionaries.

You can also check the words on the internet too.

Thank you so much composing good sentences this week.

I admire you for wanting to improve your skills more. Great!

Always find time to go over your corrections and remember the new expression your learned.

Have a blast this weekend. Take Care!

Teacher Nina

All the dictionary i have sat there is no word like this.

>> Did you mean: There are no words available on all of the dictionaries I used.
I will employ young and competent person.

>> correct

>> Better: I will employ young and competent people.
It was the harsh training.

>> It was a harsh training.

>> It was a difficult training.
We must not be lenient to the homicide.

>> We must not be lenient to the people who committed homicide. 

>> We must not be lenient to criminals.
He tried to talk about his talent with out sounding boasful.

>> He tried to talk about his talent without sounding boastful.


During final stage of world war 2,there was the most horrific war.

>> During the final stage of World War 2, it was the most horrific war.
The name of the war is iwo jima battle.

>> Better: It is called Iwo Jima Battle. 

>> The war is called Iwo Jima Battle.
It was the only one that America soldier more died than japanese soldier.

>> It was the time that more American soldiers died than Japanese soldiers.
The japanese was located at the top of the volcano and the American tried to occupy that volcano.

>> The Japanese were located at the top of the volcano and the Americans tried to occupy that place.
28165 american was dead and 6821 American was heart.

>> 28165 Americans died and 6821 American hurt.