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2015-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi Erine^^ I always worried about your condition. Take a enough break and recover it soon... That is my wish 1. John has lived in San Diego for the past 3 years (and he still lives there). 2. My brother was lived in San Diego up until last year. 3. I worked as a graphic designer before I came to England. 4. Have you finished reading the paper yet? 5. I was being in love three times in my life. 6. I was in love with Mary, but she left me for another man. 7. Frank has played tennis for three years when he was at school. 8 Did you call me last night? 9. I was at the club yesterday, but I did not see you. 10. I haven't been this upset in many years!

강사 첨삭

[이름], good morning once again.
I have been coughing but I am getting better.
I still drink the cough medicine to relieve my 
condition. I highly appreciate your concern for me.
Thank you so much.
See you soon!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi Erine^^
>> Correct.
I always worried about your condition.
>> I am always worried about your condition.
Take a enough break and recover it soon...
>>Take enough break and recover soon.
That is my wish
>>That is my wish.
1. John has lived in San Diego for the past 3 years (and he still lives
there).
>>Correct.
2. My brother was lived in San Diego up until last year.
>>was living 
3. I worked as a graphic designer before I came to England.
>>Correct.
4. Have you finished reading the paper yet?
>>Correct.
5. I was being in love three times in my life.
>>have been
6. I was in love with Mary, but she left me for another man.
>>Correct.
7. Frank has played tennis for three years when he was at school.
>>played
8 Did you call me last night?
>>Correct.
9. I was at the club yesterday, but I did not see you.
>>Correct.
10. I haven\'t been this upset in many years!
>>Correct.

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