homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Erine^^
I am sorry that I uproad the homework.
We already learned foreign language during school days.
We learned around 2~3 foreign languages.
The first language is English. Second language is option.
In my case, I choose Germany. Actually now I didn't remember Germany.
In my private thinking, Learning foreign language in school days is not bad.
It is disappearing the obstacle of world.
We need to prepare to global world.
Learning a foreign language is more difficult when someone is getting old.
When we are young student, It is easier to study English other language.
It will give new opportunities when you contact foreigners.
강사 첨삭
Good Monday morning, [이름]!
Although we won\'t be meeting today,
I hope you can check the corrections
in your homework.
I will be checking the other homework as soon as
possible.
See you soon!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi Erine^^>>Correct.
I am sorry that I uproad the homework.
>> I am sorry that I uploaded they homework. (What do you mean by the word \"uproad/upload\"? I didn\'t really understand the sentence.)
We already learned foreign language during school days.
I am sorry that I uproad the homework.
>> I am sorry that I uploaded they homework. (What do you mean by the word \"uproad/upload\"? I didn\'t really understand the sentence.)
We already learned foreign language during school days.
>> We already learned a foreign language during our school days.
We learned around 2~3 foreign languages.
We learned around 2~3 foreign languages.
>> We learned about two or three foreign languages.
The first language is English. Second language is option.
The first language is English. Second language is option.
>> The first language is English and the second language is an option.
In my case, I choose Germany.
>> In my case, I chose German.
Actually now I didn\'t remember Germany.
>> Actually, now, I don\'t remember German.
In my private thinking, Learning foreign language in school days is not bad.
In my private thinking, Learning foreign language in school days is not bad.
>> In my own opinion, learning a foreign language during the school days is not a bad idea.
It is disappearing the obstacle of world.
It is disappearing the obstacle of world.
>> It helps the obstacle in the world disappear.
We need to prepare to global world.
We need to prepare to global world.
>> We need to prepare for the global world.
Learning a foreign language is more difficult when someone is getting old.
Learning a foreign language is more difficult when someone is getting old.
>> Correct.
When we are young student, It is easier to study English other language.
When we are young student, It is easier to study English other language.
>> When we are young as a student, it will be easier to study English and another language.
It will give new opportunities when you contact foreigners.
It will give new opportunities when you contact foreigners.
>> It will give new opportunities when you come in contact with foreigners.
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