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What are some of your favorite websites? Why?
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i like to watch a TV show and drama.
Almost everday, I access the website of TV program watched.
Because, I do not have TV when I started to live a lone.
So, I usually showed the TV program that used the website.
The website is very fast uploaded the TV program.
After 2~3 hours Broadcasted the program, I show the all korea TV program.
recently, I like the program of” supurman returns”.
That TV show is entertainment that care the baby on their father alone without moter.
I thought, the show loved the audience why they have the happening of nobody do not predict.
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Good Morning, [이름]!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework!
Happy Monday to you!
I hope you\'ll have a good Monday!
It\'s a good thing to like and watch American shows. :)
So, try to watch American shows, as well. :)
-T.Faye
What are some of your favorite websites? Why?>> CORRECT:================================================================i like to watch a TV show and drama.
>> I like to watch TV show and dramas.Almost everday, I access the website of TV program watched.
>> Almost everday, I access the website of TV program to watch.Because, I do not have TV when I started to live a lone.
>> CORRECT:So, I usually showed the TV program that used the website.
>> So, I usually watched TV programs from the website.The website is very fast uploaded the TV program.
>> The website uploads the programs very fast.After 2~3 hours Broadcasted the program, I show the all korea TV program.
>> After 2~3 hours of Broadcasting the program, I saw all the korean TV program.recently, I like the program of ” supurman returns”.
>> Recently, I liked the program entitled ” supurman returns”.That TV show is entertainment, that care the baby on their father alone without moter.
>> That TV show is entertaining, he cares about the baby and their father alone, he doesn\'t have mother.I thought, the show loved the audience why they have the happening of nobody do not predict. >> I think, the show loved the audience, this show is a show that no one can predict.
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