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2015-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 abby

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Hey, Jessie. Have you spent the good weekend? I can't believe that the weekend is already over. What a fast?! Instead, the truth that can talk with you consoles me. haha It is the time to improve myself and I like it. It's really exciting for me to begin a new week. I don't know why I suddenly feel like it. Before I go, I have one question. Can't I skip 'that' in speaking and writing? I learned that I can from university and I also have heard of people using that. I was always curious and I ask now. See you and take care until that time! <Homework> 1. an 2. an 3. some 4. an 5. a 6. a 7. an 8. some 9. a 10. some Oh, you look down on me too much. hahaha

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Hi there!
Thanks for the writing on our composition page.
Well, you already know that I enjoyed my weekend.^_^
But I\'m really surprised that you are excited to start another week. That\'s new, but that\'s good. ^_^
Let\'s talk about your question. Are you asking about \'that\' as a relative pronoun?
It should have been better for you to provide an example.
But if it\'s about the relative pronoun, then, yes, we can do that.
We call it zero relative pronoun. You can do that if it doesn\'t bring a verb to the head of the relative clause.
Please check the examples.                     
The car ( that) we saw yesterday was too expensive.   [CORRECT]
                                                                  
We all saw the show that won the Tony Award this year. [CORRECT] But you cannot remove that. You cannot say:
                                                                        We all saw the show won the Tony Award this year.
I hope I answered your questions. Enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hey, Jessie.

>> Correct!
Have you spent the good weekend?
>> Have you had a good weekend?
I can\'t believe that the weekend is already over.

>> Correct!
What a fast?!
>> Do you mean: Why is it so fast?!
Instead, the truth that can talk with you consoles me. haha
>> However,
the truth that I can talk with you consoles me. haha
It is the time to improve myself and I like it.
>> Correct!
It\'s really exciting for me to begin a new week.

>> I\'m really excited to begin a new week.
I don\'t know why I suddenly feel like it.
>> Correct!
Before I go, I have one question.
>> Correct!
Can\'t I skip \'that\' in speaking and writing?

>> Correct!
I learned that I can from university and I also have heard of people using that.

>> Correct!
I was always curious and I ask now.
>>
I was always curious so I am asking now.
See you and take care until that time!

>> Correct!
 <Homework>
1. an
>> Correct!
2. an

>> Correct!
3. some

>> Correct!
4. an

>> Correct!
5. a

>> Correct!
6. a
>> He buys some cheese.
7. an

>> Correct!
8. some

>> Correct!
9. a

>> Correct!
10. some
>> Correct!
Oh, you look down on me too much. hahaha
>> Correct!
>> Was it that easy? Hahaha. No, it\'s just a review. Please don\'t feel so down. I will provide  a harder one next time. hahahha

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