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2015-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

1) what do you think it takes to be a good parent? To be a good parent is difficult to every people. because most people think that good parent is perfect for their childs. but human being is not perfect. Sometimes they can do some mistake. So, they might teach their childs wrong ways. but Absolutely there is a good parents in our society. I think a good parent is person trying to be much better parent to their childs. A person trying to be good parents will close to be a good parents. 2) Who are you most similar to in your family? I am similar to my father and mother respectively. When i was young, i was more similar my father's appearance than my mother. but As i get older, i become more similar to my mother(The orlder i get the more similar to my mother.) Especially I have a impression of my mother. but i have a double eyelid like my father. In conclusion, i inherit appearance character from my parents respectively.

강사 첨삭

Oh great! You are just so perfect that you resemble both your parents. Yes, I meant that. I believe that you are! Anyway, you have a good composition. Just keep on learning dear.  Great job! -Teacher Chloe 1) what do you think it takes to be a good parent? >>What do you think it takes to be a good parent?To be a good parent is difficult to every people. because most people think that good parent is perfect for their childs. >>To be a good parent is difficult to every people. They think that being one is perfect for their children. but human being is not perfect. >>But, human beings are not perfect. Sometimes they can do some mistake. >>Sometimes, they commint mistakes. So, they might teach their childs wrong ways. >>So, there may be an instance that they teach their children wrong doings. but Absolutely there is a good parents in our society. >>On the other hand, we have good parents in our society. I think a good parent is person trying to be much better parent to their childs. >>I think good parents try their best to be much better for their chidlren. A person trying to be good parents will close to be a good parents.>>People who are trying to be good parents are close to being good parents. 2) Who are you most similar to in your family? >>Who do you resemble the most?I am similar to my father and mother respectively. >>I resemble both my parents. >>I resemble both my father and mother. When i was young, i was more similar my father\'s appearance than my mother. >>When I was young, I was more similar with my father\'s apperance than my mother\'s. but As i get older, i become more similar to my mother(The orlder i get the more similar to my mother.) >>But as I am get older, I become more similar with my mother. Especially I have a impression of my mother. >>I am having a close resemblance with my mother now. but i have a double eyelid like my father. >>But, I have double eyelid like my father. In conclusion, i inherit appearance character from my parents respectively. >>In conclusion, I resemble my character and appearance from my parents respectively.  

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