homework
학생이 쓴 원문
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Hello again Ms. [이름]!
Well, here we go again about Monday.
But anyway, you were able to take a good rest and that is good to know.
Thanks for your time and for sharing your ideas for today.
See you again tomorrow!
You take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Would you want to have your own clone? Why/not?
I would say I wouldn\'t.
>> correct!
Let me talk about the reason right away.
>> correct!
>> or: Let me tell you the reason why.
Iam special because of scarcity which means there is only one person exsited in the world.
>> correct! (existed)
Even twins has a different appearence and personalities.
>> correct!
If I will have my own clone, I can live forever and I will clone myself several times and have different lives.
>> correct!
So I would not be so concernd about my life anymore.
>> correct! (concerned)
There are some positive things that we clone good part of our abillities but I guess we would lose more than we earn.
>> correct!
>> or: We can clone only the good parts of our abilities and that is a positive thing but I guess we could lose more than what we earned.
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