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2015-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Would you want to have your own clone? Why/not? I would say I wouldn't. Let me talk about the reason right away. Iam special because of scarcity which means there is only one person exsited in the world. Even twins has a different appearence and personalities. If I will have my own clone, I can live forever and I will clone myself several times and have different lives. So I would not be so concernd about my life anymore. There are some positive things that we clone good part of our abillities but I guess we would lose more than we earn.

강사 첨삭

Hello again Ms. [이름]!

Well, here we go again about Monday.

But anyway, you were able to take a good rest and that is good to know. 

Thanks for your time and for sharing your ideas for today.
See you again tomorrow!

You take care!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


Would you want to have your own clone? Why/not?

I would say I wouldn\'t.

>> correct!

Let me talk about the reason right away.

>> correct! 

>> or: Let me tell you the reason why.
 Iam special because of scarcity which means there is only one person exsited in the world.

>> correct! (existed)

Even twins has a different appearence and personalities.

>> correct! 

 If I will have my own clone, I can live forever and I will clone myself several times and have different lives.

>> correct! 

 So I would not be so concernd about my life anymore.

>> correct! (concerned)

There are some positive things that we clone good part of our abillities but I guess we would lose more than  we earn.

>> correct! 

>> or: We can clone only the good parts of our abilities and that is a positive thing but I guess we could lose more than what we earned.  

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