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2015-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Charlie

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I want to ask a question about the words that you like it. Because I can guess the persinality of him.

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Hi there [이름]! ^^ I am guessing this is about; HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:Composition Writing: Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important. It would be good if you were to intoduce the topic of your essay at the first sentence so that the readers would know what your essay is about. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I want to ask a question about the words that you like it.Because I can guess the persinality of him. >> I would ask questions about the things he likes because then, I would have an idea of his personality.

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