homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good Monday, TOM!
Thanks for being a great and diligent student. ^^
I admire you for composing good sentences.
I know that you really want to improve your skills.
Work on your choice of words and vocabulary skill.
Try to compose longer and meaningful ones soon. ^^
Please find the meaning of the new words that you encountered in class.
Talk to you soon. ^_^
Teacher Nina
That can kill person with minuscule poison.
>> Did you mean: A miniscule person can kill a person.
>> OR: That miniscule poison can kill a person.
THat thing is very extraordinary.
>> correct
>> OR: That thing is unusual.
Don\'t make extravagant time.
>> Did you mean: Don\'t make it extravagant.
>> OR: Don\'t make it extravagant because we don\'t have time.
Studying is worth while thing.
>> Studying is a worthwhile thing.
>> OR: Studying is worthwhile.
>> OR: Studying is worthy of my time.
We will have extemporaneous speech right here right now.
>> We will have an extemporaneous speech right now.
Eastern brown snake is one of the most dangerous one in the world.
>> correct
It has strong neurotoxin that can klii people easliy.
>> It has a strong neurotoxin that can kill people easily.
When it start to attack,it makes its body S-shape.
>> When it starts to attack, it makes its body into S-shape.
>> When it will attack someone, it turns its body into S-shape.
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