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2015-01-19 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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That can kill person with minuscule poison. THat thing is very extraordinary. Don't make extravagant time. Studying is worth while thing. We will have extemporaneous speech right here right now. Eastern brown snake is one of the most dangerous one in the world. It has strong neurotoxin that can klii people easliy. When it start to attack,it makes its body S-shape.

강사 첨삭

Good Monday, TOM!

Thanks for being a great and diligent student. ^^

I admire you for composing good sentences.

I know that you really want to improve your skills.

Work on your choice of words and vocabulary skill.

Try to compose longer and meaningful ones soon. ^^

Please find the meaning of the new words that you encountered in class.

Talk to you soon. ^_^
Teacher Nina


That can kill person with minuscule poison.

>> Did you mean: A miniscule person can kill a person.

>> OR: That miniscule poison can kill a person.
THat thing is very extraordinary.

>> correct

>> OR: That thing is unusual.
Don\'t make extravagant time.

>> Did you mean: Don\'t make it extravagant.

>> OR: Don\'t make it extravagant because we don\'t have time.
Studying is worth while thing.

>> Studying is a worthwhile thing.

>> OR: Studying is worthwhile.

>> OR: Studying is worthy of my time.
We will have extemporaneous speech right here right now.

>> We will have an extemporaneous speech right now.



Eastern brown snake is one of the most dangerous one in the world.

>> correct
It has strong neurotoxin that can klii people easliy.

>> It has a strong neurotoxin that can kill people easily.
When it start to attack,it makes its body S-shape.

>> When it starts to attack, it makes its body into S-shape.

>> When it will attack someone, it turns its body into S-shape.

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