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Hi there Miss. [Name]!
Happy Monday!

I really missed talking with you... Ho have you been doing?
By the way I made a modification below about your email. Just check them out my dear. Can\'t wait to hear your voice again tomorrow.

Please take care and have a great day..

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

hi, teacher I have return to my home yesterday from Canada.

>>Hi teacher! I have returned home from Canada yesterday.
 my calss will start tomorrow again.

>>I will start with my class again tomorrow.
Please revise this e-mail sentence for my work.
>Please revise this email for me.

OR: Can you please modify this email for me?
 We need for your help.

>>We need your help.
 Regarding replace of burner as warranty, the in charge of person is continuously reject with the massage ”need info”.

>>In regards with the warranty of the burner, the person-in-charge continues to reject us by leaving the message \"Need Info\".
 But you know it is serious problem that need to re-change the burner within only 1 month

>>But this is a serious problem wherein the burner has to be changed with in a month only.
 This re-changes due to continuous popping problem, and we have been ordering about 500 sets of burners every year for this reason.

>>correct
 So it would be appreciated if you advise the reason of the warranty to the person in charge of that.

>>correct
 And you should take care about the rejected warranty for burner. 

>>And you should also take care of the rejected warranty for the burners.
 If Garland cannot suggest the solution, this trouble will continuously happen.

>>If Garland cannot suggest any solutions. this trouble will continuously happen.