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2015-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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When you were a kid, what did you want to be when you grew up? Why? ======================================================================== When I went to elementary school, I wanted to become a teacher. I was very shy kid until fourth grade in elementary school. I met my class teacher, she changed the my character. She always complimented and cheer up to me, I have the confidence. I tried to do the speech front my classmate, and actively participate in lesson time. So,I wanted to become a teacher like the my class teacher. Than, I wanted to entrance into a university of education. It’s sad but I did not, I chose theother major of law. However I got the license of teacher that I learned to course of education. I went to middle school by the internship for three months. i really enjoyed the internship After the internship, I took a test of become a teacher at the public school. Unfortunately, I fail the test by twice. But I did not regret that try to become a teacher. I admitted the failed the test, I searched the other job

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Good Morning, [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework! I am happy that you always accmplished your homework! Keep it up! -T.Faye     When you were a kid, what did you want to be when you grew up? Why? >> CORRECT:======================================================================== When I went to elementary school, I wanted to become a teacher. >> CORRECT: I was very shy kid until fourth grade in elementary school.>> I was a very shy kid until fourth grade in elementary school.I met my class teacher, she changed the my character. >> I met my class teacher, she changed my character. She always complimented and cheer up to me, >> She always compliments and cheers me up, I have the confidence.>> Now, I have the confidence.I tried to do the speech front my classmate, and actively participate in lesson time.>> I tried to do the speech in front my classmate, and actively participated in lecture time.So,I wanted to become a teacher like the my class teacher.>> So,I wanted to become a teacher like my class teacher.Than, I wanted to entrance into a university of education.>> Then, I wanted to enter a university in education.It’s sad but I did not, I chose theother major of law.>> It’s sad but I suppress myself, I choose other major, which is law.However I got the license of teacher that I learned to course of education.>> However, I got the license of becoming a teacher and I learned tHE course of education.I went to middle school by the internship for three months. i really enjoyed the internship.>>I went to middle school for an internship for three months, I really enjoyed the internship.After the internship, I took a test of become a teacher at the public school.>> After the internship, I took a test of becoming a teacher at the public school.Unfortunately, I fail the test by twice.>> Unfortunately, I failed the test twice.But I did not regret that try to become a teacher.>> But I did not regret that because I was able to try to become a teacher.I admitted the failed the test, I searched the other job >> I admitted I failed the test, So, I searched other jobs.

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